BC-+ADA-+UpperIntermediate2


 * Now, follow the same procedure and try and do this task: **
 * 'Crime in cities is out of control. The government needs to build more prison facilities and fill them with criminals' **
 * To what extent do you agree or disagree? **


 * Present your ideas and opinions with examples where necessary. **


 * You should write 250 words **
 * Remember: **
 * Analyse the question and underline the keywords. **
 * Brainstorm ideas looking at the issue from both sides. **
 * Make a paragraph plan. **
 * Write the essay. **


 * Your essay must include: **
 * opinions with reasons **
 * real examples to prove your point **
 * linking expressions to help the reader understand where essay is going in **
 * paragraphs **

** 7 March 2014 23:59 **
Hi all, I am Ramin. Here is my essay.

Crime is a problem that concerns every one in a society, especially the governments. No society is free of bad guys. If there was not the government, its administrative power then there could be chaos everywhere. There should be harsh, strict measures against the people committing the crime. But building the prison facilities and filling them with criminals is the last step in this story. Of course, in a short term these measures might be useful. But this is not the best way out of the problem. In the long run this will not reduce the crime rate in the society. The government should take other measures like by providing education to the most vulnerable part of the society for making it more educated, by creating more jobs, reducing poverty, rehabilitating the persons already in prisons and etc.

Initially, the main causes of crime are rooted in the economical conditions in the society.The best way to reduce crime is to provide people, in particular younger generation, with jobs, to make education available for all groups of people regardless of their social status. For example, one research paper I have recently read stated that in the USA crime rate in fifty states is correlated with the poverty level, unemployment level, income inequality.

The another way the government might react is by making the existing laws stricter, harsher. Especially, free rights for selling and holding of guns, free use of drugs must be restricted as much as possible. Although we do not have such problems much in our country, but in most Western countries many crimes are committed due to these factors.

Additionally, the existing prison facilities should not be used as closed places just for keeping criminals out of the society. These places must function as rehabilitation centers. A person getting into it must come out of it as a normal one in the end. Because, as we see in the news many crimes are committed by persons who have already been in prisons for various reasons before in their lifetime.

Lastly, building more prisons, keeping more official personal might be very costly, expensive for the government. It can redirect this fund to other areas instead.

In summary, if the government's aim is to reduce the crime rate in the long run then building more prison facilities is not going to solve the problem.

Thanks.


 * Thank you so much Ramin. Very good job, your sentences are almost error free and you have applied good vocabulary and put together a nice piece. I am glad to say that your writing has improved diametrically compared to the start of the course. So happy about it, well done for the great work! Hanieh**


 * Hi all **


 * Here is a page just for you to come and share your ideas, chat, upload your files or homework, communicate and enjoy speaking English! **
 * Happy writing! **


 * Best, **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Hanieh **

Hi Teacher
I am Ela :D! And it's me, **Goshgar )**


 * Hello Goshgar :)! Nice to see you here! Everybody please write your name when you edit this page so everyone can follow up your notes! Thanks! Hanieh **

Tabriz is our city )))))))
 * I am Amil: **

Good afternoon, nice day to meet friends, to find "point of booze and glattony". Have a pleasure time all my classmates. Mehti


 * Hello Mehti and Amil :)) **
 * It is indeed a pleasure to see you all in here! And Amil you cracked me up by Tabriz message! :)) Please start putting up your homework and don't be lazy! Tonight is the deadline, remember!?! Hanieh **

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 * Well done Elizabeth, very accurate piece, you could have finished it more elegantly by summarizing what you have already explained in your conclusion paragraph. However, your work is a good one, you have used complex sentences to a good amount, good usage of vocabulary, accurate punctuation, paragraphing seems logical expect for one place. You could have also given an example or something from your experience to support your ideas. Overall, good job Eliza :), thanks for being on time and the first person to save her work! Thanks. Hanieh **

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 * Thanks so much Orkhan. Very accurate piece just like Elizabeth, in terms of grammar you are fine and you have used good range of vocabulary accurately and precisely which is a good thing. Just careful about the spelling and I would suggest that you try reading more English books as they will help you with using more complex structures, of course if you want to improve faster in your English. I am telling you a shortcut to achieve your aim faster, otherwise you are really fine at the level and I am happy to be able to give some tips if they help! Great job, thanks so much! :) **

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 * Well done Ramin, very nicely written piece. Try to include a conclusion paragraph as well when you write the essay. Supporting your ideas will be important as well as you need to mention you have thorough knowledge around what you are writing. Overall, in terms of vocabulary and grammar is fine, reading a lot will also help you with using more complex structures which will make your writing stronger! Apart from that, I am happy with your command in this skill and what you need to consider is solely the techniques to be able to achieve a required scores for this skill. Well done and thanks for the hard work! **


 * Hello everyone. **
 * I forgot my homework, sorry (((( what is my homework ????? ))))) **


 * Hi everybody **
 * This a little story regarding "how to..."**


 * Perhaps, all men have faced a garrulous women. Certainly, that sort of situation is able to irritate every normal man. Therefore to manage with this type states or to evoid such kind of** ** ladies is not easier thing. **
 * What should man do? **
 * First, if he has a conversation among a number of people and begin to remark talkative madam he must understand that is first significant signal take his away as soon as possible. Give another men unrepeatable chance to be happy with this beauty. **
 * Next, if he is in conditions where he is only a single interlocutor, man has to endeavour to make her hint that he is going to ask her out to share a lot of matters. **
 * Third moment is a quite complicated one. She is his boss or teacher. God bless him. Guys take for granted that you choise is few. It would be better for us to get ready to perform all her desires. Try to be great pantient. Play the role but remember "discretion is the better part of valour". **
 * Summing up all I can say women are briliant when they are silent but it is nessesary to take care so sometimes there is "the calm before the storm". **
 * Mehti **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt; line-height: 1.5;">Hi all **


 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Here is a page just for you to come and share your ideas, chat, upload your files or homework, communicate and enjoy speaking English! **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Happy writing! **


 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Best, **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Hanieh **

Hi Teacher
I am Ela :D! And it's me, **Goshgar )**


 * Hello Goshgar :)! Nice to see you here! Everybody please write your name when you edit this page so everyone can follow up your notes! Thanks! Hanieh **

Tabriz is our city )))))))
 * I am Amil: **

Good afternoon, nice day to meet friends, to find "point of booze and glattony". Have a pleasure time all my classmates. Mehti


 * Hello Mehti and Amil :)) **
 * It is indeed a pleasure to see you all in here! And Amil you cracked me up by Tabriz message! :)) Please start putting up your homework and don't be lazy! Tonight is the deadline, remember!?! Hanieh **

Hi from Nela510 to everybody ))) How to improve your English knowledge?

Nowadays, English is the most spoken language. It has become the most popular international language which is widely used in the communication between various nations and countries. According to that, it is very important to have a good knowledge in English in order to succeed in life. That’s why everyday people try to improve their language skills. There are three main ways of how to improve your English knowledge.

First, people should have a good vocabulary. Reading is the main source of learning new words and phrases. It will help not only to widen vocabulary but also improve your writing skills, so you will know how to use English correctly and reduce the amount of mistakes. Secondly, we must get used to spoken English and practice speaking. The best way of doing that is trying to listen to news or some television programs, or watch movies on English. Lastly, the best way of improving English skills is trying to have conversation in English, so it will increase our speaking skills which are important. It will be even better if you have a chance of speaking to English native speakers. In my opinion, if a person wants to improve and have good English, he will work hard on that and at the end will achieve his aim.


 * Well done Elizabeth, very accurate piece, you could have finished it more elegantly by summarizing what you have already explained in your conclusion paragraph. However, your work is a good one, you have used complex sentences to a good amount, good usage of vocabulary, accurate punctuation, paragraphing seems logical expect for one place. You could have also given an example or something from your experience to support your ideas. Overall, good job Eliza :), thanks for being on time and the first person to save her work! Thanks. Hanieh **

Heya ppl how are you :D Orkhan here How tooooo hmmm... lemme think... Lets talk about (hmmm)... how to kill a bear with your own hands without any weapon :D (blood MORE blood!!! RAWR!)

First of all man who wants to do that should've has alot of brute strength and vitality, agility is also welcome ( when you gotta avoid bear's furious and relentless attacks). So, as I mentioned you need months of training in gym mainly to improve bicepses of your hands. Then most interesting part begins... There are different ways to catch a bear unawarely. Using this point of view we can realise our bloody idea wihtin if youhave 3 winter limits when bears are in deep slumber. Obviously, you might find a bear lair in the forest ( where else? lol ) u and quetly and stealthily approach to bear itself. Then, trying to avoid any possible sounds you need to appear on bear's backside and sneak your pumped up hand over bear's throat.Strangling technique here is very usefull aswell. Keeping your right hand over bears neck, you put your left hand as a lever to compress right one and suddenly you start to squeeze both of your upper limbs. As I mentioned without proper agility training you will not be able to wriggle adroitly out of bear hug in case of fail (((.


 * Thanks so much Orkhan. Very accurate piece just like Elizabeth, in terms of grammar you are fine and you have used good range of vocabulary accurately and precisely which is a good thing. Just careful about the spelling and I would suggest that you try reading more English books as they will help you with using more complex structures, of course if you want to improve faster in your English. I am telling you a shortcut to achieve your aim faster, otherwise you are really fine at the level and I am happy to be able to give some tips if they help! Great job, thanks so much! :) **

Hi. It is Ramin Topic: How to achieve your goals?

All people in all age groups have their own goals, priorities that they want to achieve. But before setting the goals several factors must be taken into consideration if you want to be successful. Start by determining the goals that fit your abilities. If you decide to reach the goal that requires energy, time, ability above your potential then all the efforts, time used will be lost for nothing. So in setting the goal you must be realistic and you must not be distracted by your wishes, dreams. After deciding the goal determine the time period within which it is necessary to achieve it. Then take every possible step, opportunity to succeed, do the best what you can. You must be really keen on what you are doing. Never loose your confidence when you face whatever problems, difficulties. You might use another person's or friends' helps, advices if you don't mind. If you can not achieve your goal in the end, then do not get in depression, because it is not the end of life. Continue working as hard as you can and you will achieve many goals in the rest of your life.


 * Well done Ramin, very nicely written piece. Try to include a conclusion paragraph as well when you write the essay. Supporting your ideas will be important as well as you need to mention you have thorough knowledge around what you are writing. Overall, in terms of vocabulary and grammar is fine, reading a lot will also help you with using more complex structures which will make your writing stronger! Apart from that, I am happy with your command in this skill and what you need to consider is solely the techniques to be able to achieve a required scores for this skill. Well done and thanks for the hard work! **


 * Hello everyone. **
 * I forgot my homework, sorry (((( what is my homework ????? ))))) **


 * Hi everybody **
 * This a little story regarding "how to..."**


 * Perhaps, all men have faced a garrulous women. Certainly, that sort of situation is able to irritate every normal man. Therefore to manage with this type states or to evoid such kind of** ** ladies is not easier thing. **
 * What should man do? **
 * First, if he has a conversation among a number of people and begin to remark talkative madam he must understand that is first significant signal take his away as soon as possible. Give another men unrepeatable chance to be happy with this beauty. **
 * Next, if he is in conditions where he is only a single interlocutor, man has to endeavour to make her hint that he is going to ask her out to share a lot of matters. **
 * Third moment is a quite complicated one. She is his boss or teacher. God bless him. Guys take for granted that you choise is few. It would be better for us to get ready to perform all her desires. Try to be great pantient. Play the role but remember "discretion is the better part of valour". **
 * Summing up all I can say women are briliant when they are silent but it is nessesary to take care so sometimes there is "the calm before the storm". **
 * Mehti **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt; line-height: 1.5;">Hi all **


 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Here is a page just for you to come and share your ideas, chat, upload your files or homework, communicate and enjoy speaking English! **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Happy writing! **


 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Best, **
 * <span style="color: #800080; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;">Hanieh **

Hi Teacher
I am Ela :D! And it's me, **Goshgar )**


 * Hello Goshgar :)! Nice to see you here! Everybody please write your name when you edit this page so everyone can follow up your notes! Thanks! Hanieh **

Tabriz is our city )))))))
 * I am Amil: **

Good afternoon, nice day to meet friends, to find "point of booze and glattony". Have a pleasure time all my classmates. Mehti


 * Hello Mehti and Amil :)) **
 * It is indeed a pleasure to see you all in here! And Amil you cracked me up by Tabriz message! :)) Please start putting up your homework and don't be lazy! Tonight is the deadline, remember!?! Hanieh **

Hi from Nela510 to everybody ))) How to improve your English knowledge?

Nowadays, English is the most spoken language. It has become the most popular international language which is widely used in the communication between various nations and countries. According to that, it is very important to have a good knowledge in English in order to succeed in life. That’s why everyday people try to improve their language skills. There are three main ways of how to improve your English knowledge.

First, people should have a good vocabulary. Reading is the main source of learning new words and phrases. It will help not only to widen vocabulary but also improve your writing skills, so you will know how to use English correctly and reduce the amount of mistakes. Secondly, we must get used to spoken English and practice speaking. The best way of doing that is trying to listen to news or some television programs, or watch movies on English. Lastly, the best way of improving English skills is trying to have conversation in English, so it will increase our speaking skills which are important. It will be even better if you have a chance of speaking to English native speakers. In my opinion, if a person wants to improve and have good English, he will work hard on that and at the end will achieve his aim.


 * Well done Elizabeth, very accurate piece, you could have finished it more elegantly by summarizing what you have already explained in your conclusion paragraph. However, your work is a good one, you have used complex sentences to a good amount, good usage of vocabulary, accurate punctuation, paragraphing seems logical expect for one place. You could have also given an example or something from your experience to support your ideas. Overall, good job Eliza :), thanks for being on time and the first person to save her work! Thanks. Hanieh **

Heya ppl how are you :D Orkhan here How tooooo hmmm... lemme think... Lets talk about (hmmm)... how to kill a bear with your own hands without any weapon :D (blood MORE blood!!! RAWR!)

First of all man who wants to do that should've has alot of brute strength and vitality, agility is also welcome ( when you gotta avoid bear's furious and relentless attacks). So, as I mentioned you need months of training in gym mainly to improve bicepses of your hands. Then most interesting part begins... There are different ways to catch a bear unawarely. Using this point of view we can realise our bloody idea wihtin if youhave 3 winter limits when bears are in deep slumber. Obviously, you might find a bear lair in the forest ( where else? lol ) u and quetly and stealthily approach to bear itself. Then, trying to avoid any possible sounds you need to appear on bear's backside and sneak your pumped up hand over bear's throat.Strangling technique here is very usefull aswell. Keeping your right hand over bears neck, you put your left hand as a lever to compress right one and suddenly you start to squeeze both of your upper limbs. As I mentioned without proper agility training you will not be able to wriggle adroitly out of bear hug in case of fail (((.


 * Thanks so much Orkhan. Very accurate piece just like Elizabeth, in terms of grammar you are fine and you have used good range of vocabulary accurately and precisely which is a good thing. Just careful about the spelling and I would suggest that you try reading more English books as they will help you with using more complex structures, of course if you want to improve faster in your English. I am telling you a shortcut to achieve your aim faster, otherwise you are really fine at the level and I am happy to be able to give some tips if they help! Great job, thanks so much! :) **

Hi. It is Ramin Topic: How to achieve your goals?

All people in all age groups have their own goals, priorities that they want to achieve. But before setting the goals several factors must be taken into consideration if you want to be successful. Start by determining the goals that fit your abilities. If you decide to reach the goal that requires energy, time, ability above your potential then all the efforts, time used will be lost for nothing. So in setting the goal you must be realistic and you must not be distracted by your wishes, dreams. After deciding the goal determine the time period within which it is necessary to achieve it. Then take every possible step, opportunity to succeed, do the best what you can. You must be really keen on what you are doing. Never loose your confidence when you face whatever problems, difficulties. You might use another person's or friends' helps, advices if you don't mind. If you can not achieve your goal in the end, then do not get in depression, because it is not the end of life. Continue working as hard as you can and you will achieve many goals in the rest of your life.


 * Well done Ramin, very nicely written piece. Try to include a conclusion paragraph as well when you write the essay. Supporting your ideas will be important as well as you need to mention you have thorough knowledge around what you are writing. Overall, in terms of vocabulary and grammar is fine, reading a lot will also help you with using more complex structures which will make your writing stronger! Apart from that, I am happy with your command in this skill and what you need to consider is solely the techniques to be able to achieve a required scores for this skill. Well done and thanks for the hard work! **


 * Hello everyone. **
 * I forgot my homework, sorry (((( what is my homework <range type="comment" id="489513528_1">????? )))))</range id="489513528_1"> **


 * Hi everybody **
 * This a little story regarding "how to..."**


 * Perhaps, all men have faced a garrulous wome<range type="comment" id="489649576_1">n.</range id="489649576_1"> Certainly, that sort of situation is able to irritate every normal<range type="comment" id="489513528_2"> man</range id="489513528_2">. Therefore to manage<range type="comment" id="489649576_2"> with</range id="489649576_2"> this type states or to avoid such kind of** ** ladies is no<range type="comment" id="489649576_3">t <range type="comment" id="489513528_3">easier</range id="489513528_3"> </range id="489649576_3">thing. **
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 * Summing up all I can say women are briliant when they are silent but it is nessesary to take care so sometimes there is "the calm before the storm". **
 * Mehti **


 * Thank you very much Mehti for sharing your words of wisdom with the world, absolutely hilarious and easy to read! It was really funny how a man can be annoyed by being beside a talkative lady! Your writing seems fine in terms of grammar and vocabulary, there are some mistakes I would like you to pay more attention to as they are really trivial! Thanks again for submitting your homework finally! **

Hi Hanieh, It is Mehti I'd like to know what is our homework for Tuesday. Additionally, I've forgotten where should I send chosen item from ted.com. Whether put it here or on you gmail adress? Thanks in advance and have a nice evening.


 * Hi Mehti **
 * Hope you are fine, we were worried about you! As for the homework, just the TED talk, we haven’ be able to talk about it! So prepare your TED talk and send the link in here or via an email. Hope to see you next session J! **
 * Have a good evening. **
 * Hanieh **

Hi Hanieh, Here is Mehti My item from TED is "Art in exile" Shirin Neshat. Hoping see you soon evening and take care


 * Thanks so much Mehti :)! Hope to see you too! Hanieh**

Hi Hanieh, I (Mehti) present my essay relating our homework.

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Mehti

__**Thanks so much Mehti. good usage of grammar and vocabulary. Your ability in writing a strong script is obvious. However, try to organise your thoughts and also careful about your paragraphing as at times it doesn't seem logical. Thank you so much! :) Hanieh**__